This is where we meet, a place
Far from quitting yet
not close to winning
When my shins bleed from
My angry march through
Thorn bushels and gnat nests
And my arms ache from days left alone
With the tides, their cotton wool
Balls of muscles breathing the rest
Of no more
Until after all this mindless feeling,
My eyes glimpse my kingdom
And I fall at Your feet
Forgetting those dark moments
Before the dawn saved my life
Pleading for more Time with
The rhythm of the sea now, and
The buzz of life in the woods
In the stinging and the burning
The motivation of still separating
My eyelashes, can never be
Left without heed
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Nice poem noojie..
hey nooj :)
i do no justice to your poem to take a bite out of it, but i cnt help it -
'Until after all this mindless feeling,
My eyes glimpse my kingdom
And I fall at Your feet
Forgetting those dark moments
Before the dawn saved my life'
these words work wonders; and come very close to Rumi's effect when he says 'When I touch the ground in prayer, my only purpose is You.'
Beautiful piece, lady :)
Wslm..
The buzz of life in the woods
In the stinging and the burning...
ohhh i have scars...
wanna see? :)
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