Between my shadow and my soul


Passive aggressive fear
Enwraths your tongue into
A slithering corkscrew of hurt and anger
Seeking to etch blood from under my skin
But burning yours red with discontent instead

6 shared ideas:

desert demons February 24, 2009 at 8:38 AM  

Powerful, painful imagery! Absolutely beautiful!

Parasputin February 24, 2009 at 11:34 AM  

I'd like to use this for one of my teaching sessions, with your permission of course.

Azra February 24, 2009 at 3:57 PM  

Hmmm...speechless :)

Anonymous February 24, 2009 at 5:54 PM  

i will not spoil it with comments... i m zipped!

M Junaid February 24, 2009 at 9:52 PM  

All the things she said
All the things she said
Running through my head
Running through my head
(Running through my head)
This is not enough

Nooj February 24, 2009 at 11:55 PM  

desert demons- as queen of s and m poetry- a compliment dont doubt it:)- i take this compliment very highly

as original inspiration of parasputinism, you get implicit copyright :)

haha azzy and seher this is an amazing feat u fellow chatterboxes :P

Mj i like that song too