Between my shadow and my soul

Ping Poing

Pic pic pic clatters a keyboard
Poc poc poc thoughts and letters unite
Pic poc pic poc pic pic poc
the song of sounding ideas and resounding comments

8 shared ideas:

KiLLa October 19, 2008 at 10:49 PM  

So what do "un-resounding" comments sound like.

Cos those are all that i get..

[word verification on this comment thing is bollockx. Not that i am one of importance, but kindly remove]

todays encrypt reads dpxhwpvdy

Nooj October 19, 2008 at 11:01 PM  

probly plack! (the sound of the ball hitting a tiled floor and cracking in half)
altho. you should've been able to save that ball through the nimbleness of argument and strategical postulation
by playing a 2 player interactive game, unlike for example golf, you choose to have to interpret the other dude's signals
i type a lot when i have dissertation deadlines
erm i like word verification. makes ppl think before they click publish your comment
don't take it personally :P

KiLLa October 19, 2008 at 11:04 PM  

LoL @ plack...

1stly why did u choose golf.. Was it like random, or did insight mention it was my most beloved sport (that i engage in once a week).. That was genius or pure luck..

And when u tend to interpret other ppls signals,i personally find u try ending up judging that person..
[solution - i read but dont comment back.. if i feel the need to.. i mail em]

No.. word verification.. lead to ppl getting glasses when they not required :P

(did u read my aids story.. just asking)..

Khadija October 19, 2008 at 11:15 PM  

Is it frustration with words or a frustration with the inability of words as lexicalised thoughts to spring up from the page and do more?

Nooj October 20, 2008 at 9:13 AM  

killa, no i didn't, where is it?

hmmmm khadija you always make me reflect on my words more than i usually do before i pic poc :)
not really frustration. more of an acceptance and appreciation of the limitations of this kind of idea-sharing. and yes a hope that these words do not remain words, that they filter out into the "real world". like the hadith about when you see a wrong. and yet the song by itself has the ability to be pleasurable. even tho we know it is not Enough. please keep practising linguistics on me :)

KiLLa October 20, 2008 at 9:22 AM  

By no means is this a mockery now..
Just so u know..


M Irfaan October 21, 2008 at 5:22 PM  

have you ever watched fingers carefffffully stepping out a little ditty in turn? my joints like knees in an especially seductive motioning of braodways pearled.

a step here, cross over, one two three, four, thank you miss.

poised to pose, fluxed to flush. and an ounce of superfluous punctuation to say what i meant, what i wanted to mean.

don't catch up to quickly please? only i've my breath to catch, trying to tug yours. one day i might just yet.



Nooj October 22, 2008 at 9:02 AM  

ahh irfaan the imagery of a chivalrous tap dancer in the twilight wooing the moon's affections