Between my shadow and my soul

Red Magic

In your Eyes
My heartbeats were
As mercury in a thin tube

____ ing
__ ar
P l
__u m m
______e t t i n g

An affirmation of your presence,
is all.

5 shared ideas:

Khadija August 30, 2008 at 11:41 AM  

:)) brilliant typography, made me smile.

Parasputin August 30, 2008 at 11:45 AM  

sweet and warm, with a certain tartness, like toffee apples.

shafinaaz August 30, 2008 at 10:16 PM  

i love the soaring plummeting move u made there! SUPER AWESOME little nooj *all grown up*

mwah. ramadaan kareem :)

Noorjehaan September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM  

thanks kay, was worried twas a bit corny :)

P- sweeet?? valiant try but this rock ain't crumbling :P i love similes involving food. they make so much more sense than any other descritpive terms

ha ha shafs you and my dad have to put it in stars to remind yourselves :P shukran may you have a blessed contemplative mabroor ramadhan too...

Crimson Shimmer September 3, 2008 at 1:21 AM  

Ramadaan Mubarak nooj :)
love the poem...
with shafs: excellence on the soaring plummet trick ;)