Between my shadow and my soul


Boys like greasy burgers
Sauntering with sauciness,
Flaunt their floppy lettuce,
Slime your lips and
Leave a taste that itches
Of thirsty regret

9 shared ideas:

KimyaShafinaaz August 12, 2008 at 3:37 PM  

this is awesomeness strung together in little bits from the site of a blast... amazing where wonder can be found :P

The Organ Harvester August 12, 2008 at 4:16 PM  

you're so not talking about food. Or maybe that's just me.

Waseem August 12, 2008 at 4:27 PM  

girls are pretty
but not like carrot cake
more like early autumn
or the sun when you wake
some girls are ugly
we dont talk about them.

I refuse to accept that as poetry by Waseem, i deny it vehemently if confronted on this issue, its more like a nursery rhyme.

Dew_drops August 12, 2008 at 11:50 PM  

Aw I liked this!

Noorjehaan August 13, 2008 at 11:42 AM  

lol thanks kimya you make it sound better than it is

hmmm OH you thinking of the kinda itchy regret that can be cured with corticosteroids? *nooj scrubs windowlene on blog to dispel effects of OH's mind*

wow waseeeem very sweeeet and ghei :) give us more!!!

thankee doo, were you talking about mine or waseem's?

Parasputin August 13, 2008 at 11:43 AM  


"flaunt their floppy lettuce"

instantly castrates

love it.

Crimson Shimmer August 14, 2008 at 7:12 PM  

parasputinism spreading like wild fire.
do you catch it from chowing burgers :P
nice one ;)
and waseems... :)

Noorjehaan August 15, 2008 at 11:57 PM  

P- dark hey :)

CS- as a matter of fact
i flipping love gourmet burger!!!! def not greasy it's like braai
without the smoke in your eyes (that's a chatterji couplet)

if there is ever a reason why i'd suicide bomb the cape is that you guys have so many yum yum halaal outlets compared to us :(

Crimson Shimmer August 19, 2008 at 2:14 AM  

lol` believe it or not.
i have yet to taste the gourmet burger :(